Why we should stop people being animated.

We should stop people being animated because a lot of people don't like it and, people that are animated get made fun of and people don't like it when they do squeaky voices.

A lot of people don't like it because my friends don't like it so we don't like it.

Basically the world doesn't like it.

People that are animated get made fun of and it is not ok to make fun at people and it hurts them.   

People do not like it when they do squeaky voices because it hurts my ears and it is annoying.

That is why we should stop people being animated.

By Joy

Why We Should Have Coke In The Fountains instead of water.

1. We should have c
   coke in the fountains instead of water.

E: We should have coke in the fountains because so at lunch and morning tea we can get hyper.

E: we need more sugar.

2. some people don't get coke and some people do.

E: kids don’t get fizys or nice drinks.

E: some people don't have money and can't get cool drinks.

3. E: People don’t like water and need some different kind of drink. E: Some people need to clean the toilet with it.

AND THAT'S WHY WE SHOULD HAVE COKE IN THE FOUNTAINS.

BY JOYYY

The Otaki Storm

We are learning to do a newspaper report about the storm. We were doing some news reports and we each were thinking of our own kind of story.  It was about this windmill farmer and there was a storm and after the storm it was winter and after winter he went outside and he saw all of the windmill grown back.

Zealandia Trip

Right Place, Right Time

Hi! This week we are learning to share our understanding of what being in the right place at the right time means. We have come up with some tips to help us!

Storm Poem

We are leaning to write poems about the storm. We were describing animals as the storm. We learnt to write metaphors, similes and personification is when you give an object a human action.                                                                                                                                                                                              The Storm

The storm is like a fast cheetah

It leaps high and powerful jump

It runs fast and it stretches its legs across the city

Black brown and yellow coat

It purrs quietly and roars loudly

Running and leaping across the city

The storm rips off all the grass

Rough and hurtful

Bright and spotty

By Joy O’Dwyer

My Google Drawing

All About Me

Hi my name is Joy. I am 9 years old and I am a year 4, in room 6.  I go to Waitohu School in Otaki. My favourite food is fish and chips.  My favourite thing to do is play with my friends.  My favourite animals are cats. My favourite thing to do is play and eat. The thing I mostly like to do is make things and I love to sleep. I have the best teacher in the world.  See ya.