Monday, 16 December 2019
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Hi Joy my friend! Biscuit and cans of fruit seem like good ideas. Nuts are good to. But wouldn't your chocolate melt? And where did you get your images? Remember to attribute all images.
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thank you for the help i will try it nexst time
DeleteKia Ora Joy, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteI really like your voyage rations. They sound delicious.I also really like how you’ve included graphics in the background of your post. It’s cool how it looks like the boat is sailing through the sea, and I like that you’ve included a picture of bananas.
I’m very impressed by how thoughtfully you have chosen your food. You’ll definitely keep the crew happy and healthy with your supplies. I like that you have included lots of fruit in a variety of forms to make sure everyone is in peak condition, and I like that you’ve remembered snack foods as well. I also really appreciate that you have included chocolate as a special treat.
What’s your favourite food? Is it included on the list, or is it something different?
Had you thought about using a different font colour to really make your post stand out? You could also increase the size of the text or make it bold to really make it pop.
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Shannon
I really like the way you have included a variety of different foods in your list Joy. I agree with Ailie, your chocolate might melt.... but it would still be delicious!
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